英國留學個人陳述解析

　　立思辰留學360分析到，個人陳述(PS)是國內(nèi)學生申請英國大學研究生必須要提交的申請材料之一。個人陳述也是申請者對自己的評述，如個人能力、性格、愛好等。個人陳述的好壞有時和申請成功緊密相關。

　　那么如何出一篇好的個人陳述呢?首先大家要反思自己的學習經(jīng)歷;確立文章的主題，寫作也要有自己的特色。同學們可以多參看寫優(yōu)秀的個人陳述范文，結(jié)合自己的實際情況才能寫出好的PS.

　　由于商科類申請的同學偏多，留學360留學小編特地為大家分享一篇商科類的個人陳述，希望大家可以從中找到靈感。

　　As a child I often accompanied my father to his small coin shop and spent hours watching him work. When I was older, I sometimes set up displays, waited on customers, and even balanced the books. This experience instilled in me the desire to own and manage my own business someday, yet I understand that the business world today is more complex. This complexity requires more education, and with that in mind, I am applying to the Master’s of Business Administration program at Indiana University Bloomington (IUB).

　　通過一個故事開頭，講述自己為何對business感興趣。

　　In addition to my helping out in my father’s business, I have had numerous other work experiences that further enhance my qualifications for this program. My resume enumerates the various positions I have held at Kerasotes Theaters, Chili’s restaurants, and Indiana University’s new Student Recreational Sports Center (SRSC), and what all of these positions have in common is an emphasis on serving the public effectively. Further, as an assistant manager at the Showplace 11 and a staff coordinator at the SRSC, I have gained valuable expertise in managing employees and creating work schedules. Both of these positions have allowed me to develop my sales and people skills, which are extremely important in an increasingly service-driven marketplace.

　　講述自己的相關經(jīng)歷。但是感覺在談及經(jīng)歷時候不夠具體，應該說明具體做了什么事情，從中得到什么經(jīng)驗或者教訓。

　　Not all of my work experience has been as a paid employee. Part of my volunteering experience at Middleway House, the local battered women’s shelter, involved extensive work on computers, including word processing, organizing databases and creating spreadsheets. Also, I recently participated in an internship program for academic credit with the Eli Lilly corporation in the personnel division. As a management intern, I was able to watch the workings of a major corporation up close and would like the opportunity to combine my experiences with the theoretical background available in the MBA program at IUB, with its emphasis on computers, marketing and human resources.

　　志愿者活動同樣值得在ps中講述。

　　My successful internship is one element of my overall academic success as an undergraduate here at IUB, yet I have also made time for a variety of extracurricular activities, including working for my sorority and competing in intramural basketball. My positive experiences here have resulted in my desire to stay in Bloomington to continue my academic endeavors; furthermore, continuing my education here would allow me to make important business contacts, with the career goal of opening my own computer consulting firm in the Midwest.